Hey kiddos, I'm sick today, the kind of sick that makes you feel like death when you wake up. I figured that rather than subjecting you to an hour of me coughing and blowing my nose while heavily medicated, I'd stay home and write you a blog instead. Although, to be fair, I'm really entertaining on cold meds.
Today don't worry abut bell work, let's have some silent reading time instead. I'm a little worried that it won't be so silent because you already have the laptops, but once you read this, go grab and book and do your best. Read for about 10 minutes, ok? Ready? Go.
Are you back? Good. Today we are editing your rough draft. Editing isn't just about fixing the grammar and spelling mistakes, it's about really making your paper better. To make sure you really put some effort into this, I'd like you to change 10 sentences in your paper, and add either a simile or a metaphor. You don't have to completely change each sentence, you can change just a part of it, but 10 sentences must be different. A simile or metaphor will add imagery to your paper, and Cambridge loves imagery.
Ok, stay busy, be good, and hopefully I will see you tomorrow.
Love,
Your about to be heavily drugged English teacher.